I'm writing tech articles and just want to know your opinions about the following paragraph is it correct or not.
The poorly written one:
"If your PC got hacked or accessed by some intruder and you may copy some passwords or any sensitive data on your clipboard, maybe your bank account login, or any other sensitive data, in addition, some clipboard viewers send the data over the internet, not for bad purposes, but for the sake of cloud data access, so you can access your clipboard data…
Which one is proofreaded or better for native English speaker
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